1 00:00:00,200 --> 00:00:02,920 Speaker 1: Jenesy and Amanda jam Nation. 2 00:00:03,120 --> 00:00:04,760 Speaker 2: Down to the Jonesy no matter of arms for the 3 00:00:04,760 --> 00:00:08,200 Speaker 2: pub test Today, Roll Dahl and James Bond making amendments 4 00:00:08,240 --> 00:00:10,119 Speaker 2: to their books. Does it passed the pub test? 5 00:00:10,360 --> 00:00:13,760 Speaker 3: It seems that sensitivity readers have highlighted some areas that 6 00:00:13,800 --> 00:00:16,760 Speaker 3: they feel need changing. For example, in Roll Dahal, if 7 00:00:16,760 --> 00:00:19,320 Speaker 3: someone has a negative personality trait, it will be associated 8 00:00:19,360 --> 00:00:22,320 Speaker 3: with a physical trait, whether they're fat or ugly. 9 00:00:22,520 --> 00:00:25,479 Speaker 2: Well, in The Fantastic Mister Fox, the black tractor is 10 00:00:25,480 --> 00:00:27,200 Speaker 2: not a black DA's just a tractor. Now it's not 11 00:00:27,240 --> 00:00:29,560 Speaker 2: a black tractor. So you can't describe what anything looks 12 00:00:29,600 --> 00:00:30,760 Speaker 2: like anymore, you. 13 00:00:30,720 --> 00:00:32,200 Speaker 1: Know, put things in a context. 14 00:00:32,200 --> 00:00:34,800 Speaker 3: You don't have to change them, so we can't rewrite books. 15 00:00:34,800 --> 00:00:35,640 Speaker 1: Will be book burninge. 16 00:00:35,840 --> 00:00:38,120 Speaker 2: Did they do it to our books? Because yours is 17 00:00:38,159 --> 00:00:43,040 Speaker 2: full of like horrible horrible words. 18 00:00:43,479 --> 00:00:45,320 Speaker 1: Words some have more than one syllable brand and they 19 00:00:45,400 --> 00:00:45,800 Speaker 1: threw you. 20 00:00:45,840 --> 00:00:48,559 Speaker 2: Right off, some sensitivity readers on your book. 21 00:00:48,640 --> 00:00:50,440 Speaker 3: So put it to the pub test. Roll Darl and 22 00:00:50,560 --> 00:00:52,960 Speaker 3: James Bond making amendments to the books. As it passed 23 00:00:53,000 --> 00:00:53,560 Speaker 3: the pub test. 24 00:00:54,600 --> 00:00:58,120 Speaker 4: If you don't have enough intellectual apt to read the 25 00:00:58,160 --> 00:01:01,280 Speaker 4: book and realize, oh you know this thing, this is 26 00:01:01,360 --> 00:01:03,760 Speaker 4: now you need to get out of yourself like this 27 00:01:03,920 --> 00:01:07,080 Speaker 4: white crap is just ridiculous. The things that are made, 28 00:01:07,120 --> 00:01:10,400 Speaker 4: they don't need to be changed. Attitudes can change, but 29 00:01:10,440 --> 00:01:14,000 Speaker 4: the material doesn't need to be changed. It's just ridiculous. 30 00:01:14,160 --> 00:01:17,720 Speaker 5: No, I think Disney's got the right idea of making 31 00:01:17,800 --> 00:01:19,880 Speaker 5: it a talking point and a learning point. 32 00:01:20,080 --> 00:01:25,240 Speaker 6: Definitely not. Basically, books are a piece of history. You 33 00:01:25,280 --> 00:01:27,679 Speaker 6: can't just go and change this piece of history just 34 00:01:27,720 --> 00:01:31,760 Speaker 6: because we happen to think differently. Now. It would be 35 00:01:31,840 --> 00:01:35,120 Speaker 6: like changing the Bible just because we think differently. Now 36 00:01:35,520 --> 00:01:38,600 Speaker 6: for me, leave them alone and just to explain how 37 00:01:38,800 --> 00:01:41,160 Speaker 6: things were back in those days and how they've progressed. 38 00:01:41,240 --> 00:01:43,840 Speaker 6: So now, well I'll leave it alone. It's historically, I 39 00:01:43,920 --> 00:01:44,360 Speaker 6: agree with you. 40 00:01:44,400 --> 00:01:47,160 Speaker 4: It's historically the way that it was written that encouraged 41 00:01:47,160 --> 00:01:49,080 Speaker 4: the conversation to change your behavior. 42 00:01:49,240 --> 00:01:51,919 Speaker 5: It definitely does not pass it up to those books 43 00:01:51,920 --> 00:01:54,520 Speaker 5: are any dam it's because the original content. No one's 44 00:01:54,520 --> 00:01:57,520 Speaker 5: going to read them. If they namby pamy gotten candy rubbish, 45 00:01:57,680 --> 00:01:59,800 Speaker 5: it won't be long before there's no more adjectives you 46 00:01:59,800 --> 00:02:01,840 Speaker 5: can describe anything ridiculous. 47 00:02:02,920 --> 00:02:06,600 Speaker 1: How are we going to describe stuff interesting. It's a 48 00:02:06,680 --> 00:02:08,480 Speaker 1: very good point. There'll be no more adjectives. 49 00:02:08,639 --> 00:02:09,800 Speaker 2: No more adjectives,